Sorry took me so long to get to listening to this mang but here's my thoughts:
Good topline/melody, keeps its catchiness all the way through, head bobbin and all lol. Drums are nice and punchy in the beginning but feels like it looses a little bit of punch once it gets into the thick of things. I love what you did with the bass, specially at around 0:47 and around the 1 min mark. i'm not sure whats taking me out of it though. feels like the bass should be punching a little more in general but idk. love what you did with it still, especially working through the technical dificulties like that! got some real potential as an artist my friend. Keep up the awesome work!